Rereading Esther Morgan's poem As I Walked Out in last Saturday's Guardian Review, I was struck by a similarity of theme with the poem I wrote yesterday, a vagabond life. Although the means of expression are quite different, both poems are about the dream of escaping from a mundane present.
As I Walked Out
Don't tell me you've never dreamed of this -
of waking in a room with a wide open window,
the air clear and ringing after night rain;
of needing no other reason than a sky
the unbelievable blue of which
sends you flitting deftly through the house
past the year-old jar of nails and flies,
the pile of dishes in the sink, and out the back door
where you're caught for an instant in the brightness
because the future's so much easier than you'd thought -
slipping your heart under the rosebush like a key,
everything you need in the canvas bag
resting lightly at your hip
and life as simple as turning left or right.
ESTHER MORGAN (From her collection Grace published by Bloodaxe)
11 comments:
Lovely poem. But I think I left part of my heart hung on one of the thorns on that rose bush. Next time, I'm taking it with me.
thanks for this - missed it on Saturday. A good poem, and I haven't come across the poet before - but I think a bit of stability is the order of the moment for me
Andy
A wonderful poem, and it's nice to think that the future will be easier than we thought!
Yes, I enjoyed that poem in Saturday's Guardian Robert, and funnily enough I thought of you too.
Wonderful.
This poem brighten the future.
Thanks
Yes, I really like this poem - deftly, beautifully written. Though I think the future may not be as easy as all that...
'Slipping your heart under the rosebush like a key...' What a great line.
Beautiful poem:
where you're caught for an instant in the brightness/
because the future's so much easier than you'd thought
Those are the best of days.
Ah, if only...thanks.
Thanks for calling in, Susan and Roy!
Yes, I see the similar wistfulness between the poems.
That "slipping your heart like a key" line is a knock-out!
Yes, a killer line, absolutely, Ruth!
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